Form Simulasi Praktik Editing

 

 

EDITORIAL SKILL IN ENGLISH

PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING

(PBLL-Editing)

No

INSTRUCTIONS

V

V

1.

Treat the draft as an accepted manuscript to the Editorial Department.

2.

Use the red ink pen to mark your editorial findings

3.

Write the name of manuscript’s writer within the box

4.

Write your name as an editor within the editor’s box

5.

Write the title of manuscript

6.

Edit the manuscript by using the editorial signs

7.

Put  the number of your editorial findings (mechanical, substantive, pictorial)  within the box right-side

8.

Write your verbal verification either suggestion, comment, or input  for the manuscript’s improvement.

9.

Give your editorial judgment  about manuscript from the perspective of prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, publishing, marketing, delivering)

GOOD LUCK.. BE YOUR BEST.

Name

Function (See: Team Working)

Muhammad Dafi Alfian

Writer 1

Ghifari Zufar Ramadhan

Writer 2

Rena Arizka

Writer 3

Adji Julian Firaisyah

Editor 1

Muhammad Lutfi

Editor 2

Zahran Halya Wijayanto

Editor 3

Title of Manuscript

PROPOSAL PHOTOGRAPHY BUSINESS PLAN “GDRive Project”

C=Competence :  NC= Non Competence

No

Editorial Findings

Number

Key Word

C

NC

BOOK   ANOTOMY

A

BAGIAN SAMPUL (SAMPUL BUKU)

1

Jaket Sampul

2

Lidah Jaket sampul Depan

3

Lidah Jaket Sampul Belakang

4

Judul Buku

PROPOSAL PHOTOGRAPHY BUSINESS PLAN “GDRive Project”

B

BAGIAN PENDAHULUAN

1

Sheetblad Depan 1 (yang menempel di sampul depan)

2

Sheetblad Depan 2

3

Sheetblad Depan 3

4

Sheetblad Depan 4

5

Halaman Judul (memuat judul saja dengan font ukuran kecil)

PROPOSAL PHOTOGRAPHY BUSINESS PLAN “GDRive Project”

6

Halaman Pancir (memuat judul dan pengarang)

PROPOSAL PHOTOGRAPHY BUSINESS PLAN “GDRive Project” Arranged By: 1. Ghifari Zufar Ramadhan 2. Rena Arizka 3. Muhammad Dafi Alfian

7

Halaman Persembahan

8

Judul dalam (Full Title)

✓

9

Halaman Pengantar Penulis

10

Halaman Pengantar Penerbit

11

Halaman Pengantar Editor Ahli

12

Halaman Prancis (Copyright)

13

Halaman Daftar Isi

✓

C

BAGIAN ISI

1

Halaman Isi

✓

2

Judul Bab

✓

3

Halaman Pembahasan

✓

4

Halaman Ilustrasi (gambar atau foto)

D

BAGIAN PENYUDAH

1

Lampiran

2

Catatan

3

Indeks

4

Singkatan

5

Takrir (Daftar Istilah disertai Penjelasan yang disusun secara berurutan abjad)

6

Daftar Pustaka

7

Biografi Penulis

8

Sanwacana (Teks yang berisi ucapan terima kasih penulis)

9

Sheetblad Belakang 1

10

Sheetblad Belakang 2

11

Sheetblad Belakang 3

12

Sheetblad Belakang 4 (yang menempel di sampul belakang)

E

MECHANICAL EDITING

ED I TOR I L DOMA I N

1

Types

2

Words

7

·          God almighty ·          English specifics ·          Purpose ·          Need not ·          Along ·          Results driven ·          Crative

3

Phrase

·          Noun Phrase A photographer can Shoot up to hundreds of images. ·          Adjective Phrase Indonesia is unique ·          Adverbial Phrase who has provided pleasure, so that we can complete this final project on time. ·          Prepositional Phrase In the past decade, the development of the Indonesian photography industry has continued to increase. ·          Participial Phrase The producer's interest was triggered

4

Clause

5

Punctuations

6

Comma

6

·          standards. But ·          increase. In fact, ·          creative way, moreover, ·          advanced, meaning ·          Yes, along ·          field. Of course, it

7

Colon

6

·          Vision >> Vision: ·          Mission >> Mission: ·          Strength >> Strength: ·          Witness >> Witness: ·          Opportunity >> Opportunity: ·          Threats >> Threats:

8

Semi Colon

1

We focus on small and lower size businesses that are just starting their business, like umkm.

9

Prepositionq

10

Dictions

f

SUBSTANTIVE EDITING

1

Content Accuracy

2

Language Consistency

3

Message Originality

4

Reader’s Interest

5

Coherence

G

PICTORIAL EDITING

1

Photograph

2

Tabel

3

Graph

4

Harmony

5

Balancing

6

White Space

7

Color

H

TIM KECIL (Small Team)

1

Corresponding Writre

Dr. Zalzulifa M,pd

TE AM  WORKING

2

Writer

GDRive Project

3

Editor

LAZ Production

4

Cover Designer

Muhammad Dafi Alfian

5

Setter

Rena Arizka

I

TIM SEDANG (Medium Team)

1

Corresponding Writre

2

Penyusun Data

3

Penulisa Naskah (Writer)

4

Penerjemah (Translator)

5

Penyunting (Editor)

6

Aisten Editor

7

Cetak Coba (Proof Reader)

8

Ilustrator

9

Desainer Sampul Buku

10

Desainer Isi

11

Setter

J

TIM BESAR (Buku dengan Multimedia)

1

Corresponding Writre

2

Dewan Redaksi

3

Editor Kepala

4

Editor Eksekutif

5

Aisten Editor

6

Editor Ahli

7

Kontributor (Peneliti)

8

Penulis Naskah

9

Penerjemah

10

Proofreader

11

Pengarah Artistik

12

Ilustrator

13

Fotografer

14

Desainer Sampul Buku

15

Desainer Isi

16

Desainer Produk

17

Model

18

Producer

19

Animator

20

Reporter

21

Penulis Skenario

22

Pengisi Suara

23

Penulis Lirik Lagu

24

Penggubah Lagu

25

Arranger

26

Penyanyi

27

Pemain Musik

Verbal Verification:   The proposal is sufficient but there are some of the sentences that are wrong in the use of words, punctuation, and language determination.

Editorial Judgment   Overall it is correct and neat in terms of arrangement and construction, but there are some parts that are wrong and need to be corrected in the use of (,), (.). which can be corrected and there are also errors in sentences that deviate far from the meaning contained

Time and Signature